CK Lynn

Ooooh, creepy. Very nice, though. The imagery was very good. I'm not sure what your subject is. Oh, lies. *slaps self on forehead* I should read the titles! The only ...

You can have a Mod, move or delete, this copy, if you want. That way its out of Poetry.

I actually really liked this. Short and sweet, but still filled with bittersweet emotions. Very nice. Please use apostrephes (is that speeled right?) though.

Very good. I liked the rythmic-repetitiveness. I do think "nth" would be better as "billionth" or "infininth" though. It's a bit awkward.

I really liked it-all except for the last line. It just didn't sound the same as the rest.

The ryhme didn't work for me. Other than that, I really liked it. Please, expand! This theme deserves a longer poem!

Nice. It was sentimental and true without feeling too gushy. I don't really like the title, though, for some reason. It was a bit too long. Over all it was ...

I liked it. Unique. I would, however, change the title to "Simple" as that.

Pretty good. Not steryotypical like I thought it was going to be, but instead well thought-out and real.

Haunting. Kind of bittersweet, like a happy memory. The only thing wrong I found was that sometimes you don't capitalize your I's.

I don't know why you deleted this. From what I see on AVilicious666 and LoveableLittleSock's critques, it was quite good, aside from a few captilization/grammer mistakes.

You definately captured the frustrations of all the big tests heaped on during one week. I would like to see the verses made longer, as well as the ryhme (is ...

Um, was there something posted here?

That was really great! I loved the sort of shadowy imagery, with the descriptions of running water and time not mattering. Dark and mysterious. The only thing I'd like to ...

Hmmm. It was nice, but a little to flowers-and-perfume-y. None of it seemed very tangible. I don't think any guy, historical or not, would actually say this.